My World in Motion
The MWiM project is basically an overview of our lives seen through our eyes by our writing. We have written two journal entries and two poems and drawn pictures to go with each of them. We are having them made into a book which we will display at exhibition night.
This is my first poem. "Remember". It is about overcoming heartbreak.
This poem is a draft because it needs more adjectives added. This is one of my first drafts; I have done many different drafts of each of my pieces because I wanted each one to become the best that it could.
This poem is a draft because it needs more adjectives added. This is one of my first drafts; I have done many different drafts of each of my pieces because I wanted each one to become the best that it could.
remember.doc | |
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"That Secret" is about my first love.
This poem is a draft because I had a few spelling errors and Marci thought that I needed to add more adjectives. As I was revising this, I ignore one of the comments that Marci made because I disagreed with it.
This poem is a draft because I had a few spelling errors and Marci thought that I needed to add more adjectives. As I was revising this, I ignore one of the comments that Marci made because I disagreed with it.
that_secret.doc | |
File Size: | 26 kb |
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This journal entry is about my name, what its signifigance is and how it is special to me.
This is a draft because it has many punctutaion errors. As I revised it, I changed a few of the paragraphs so that it made more sense.
This is a draft because it has many punctutaion errors. As I revised it, I changed a few of the paragraphs so that it made more sense.
my_name.doc | |
File Size: | 21 kb |
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This entry is about my family moving to America, and their childhoods.
This journal is a draft because it needed to be revised all over. I had many punctutation and spelling errors to fix.
This journal is a draft because it needed to be revised all over. I had many punctutation and spelling errors to fix.
escelator_steps.doc | |
File Size: | 25 kb |
File Type: | doc |